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不行~那我不是白写了吗??有语病也要发表~~哈哈!!!LZ,当作文欣赏就行啦!!
On the National Day,I went to the Hainan Island.The scenery was very beautiful because of the seawater and the coconut there.
I went swimming.The seawater is so clean that I like it very much.I ate some coconut.The coconut on Hainan Island is so delicious.You may never want to eat any other coconut after your tasting.I went to visit Tianyahaijiao,too.I was so marvelled at all the scenery.It's nearly perfect .
I was so happy and benefited.